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When I think twice; push comes to shove

You gave me warmth with wings of love

When Indifference makes doubt arise

You gave me hope and dried my eyes.



To wake when each day'd begin

To have you laying in my bed

I'd rub my hand across your side

To you my love I would confide



That's all I'd want, all I'd need

To have you laying next to me

As days would pass I gave my soul

What can I say? You made me whole



But in the end I turned away

I forced your love to slowly fade

There's nothing I can say or do

To change the path you had to choose



Cause he was there to break your fall

And in your eyes he stood so tall

He said those things you'd need to hear

When I was gone or was not near



He filled your heart, your mind, your eyes

With words of hope, and love, and lies...

And now I sit alone with guilt

And all the dreams of what I built



And I won't lie about the pain

Just know my love will never fade

I'll never make the same mistake

I swear I'll change, for heaven's sake



Theres nothing I can say or do

To prove how much I love you

And never know, what I would give

To have you in my arms again...
©2008-2010 ~AlastorOfAlbion
:iconalastorofalbion:

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I wrote this around the beginning of the year. It's about my ex from about a year ago and, well, it kinda explains itself. lol

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:iconsephiroththepure:
I'm glad you submitted this! Now, as for a title idea...I'm out. XD

"The Pledge" went without a title for about a week, and then I just gave it a mediocre title, cause I was tired of saying "my untitled poem" every time I wanted to reference it.

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Why the Mythbusters try to keep Jamie happy.

:heart: So much love for my Aimi. :heart:
:iconalastorofalbion:
Yeah but I can't even think of a mundane title for it lol
:iconsephiroththepure:
How about "Regret"? Or something along those lines? Sometimes just one word is enough to jog something in your mind.

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Why the Mythbusters try to keep Jamie happy.

:heart: So much love for my Aimi. :heart:
:iconstockholmhasa:
Is it bad that this makes me tear up?

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There's nothing witty here, move along.
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:iconalastorofalbion:
Your childish insults are just another attempt to rile me up. Yet they're effortless as they fall on deaf ears. There's no need to for this. Come to Maryland and stop hiding behind your words like you've been doing this entire. Otherwise, shut up and grow up.

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"People say that god is dead, but how can they think that...if I show them the devil?"

"These hands will always be rough..."
:iconemosarefags:
Alright man, look here, i feel for you. Those last 2 poems actually opened my eyes a bit. I understand you feel pain, and i didnt realize it was that extreme for u. I honestly want to just clear the air. What i said was juvenile I agree. I feel for you because i understand what it is like to lose someone. And i had a lot of pent up anger agaisnt u because the previous situations that we upheld. I express to u my sincerest condolences. I no longer want any hatred being spread, and i want this to be done and over with. You mentioned i need to grow up, well here is a grown up response. I hope that this can be put in the past. Im not asking to make up and be friends, i dont believe that ever could/will be possible wether either of us wanted it or not. Just reconciliation. Im sorry.
:iconalastorofalbion:
I'm not a man to hold grudges so apology accepted. Everyone makes mistakes, we're human after all, arent we?

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"People say that god is dead, but how can they think that...if I show them the devil?"

"These hands will always be rough..."
:iconemosarefags:
well good, im glad, i feel better know. Im sorry that i had to bring all that crap out of u to realize. thank you for accepting my apology

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